Someone wrote in [personal profile] sinsrequiem 2010-03-18 11:59 pm (UTC)

Anon doesn't have any crit for your characterization at the moment, but would like to point out that proofreading would probably catch a lot of little grammatical mistakes you make, especially with regards to subject+verb agreement.

It happens to a lot of RPers, so don't feel bad about it. Maybe just keep an eye open for it a little more.

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